As a result of this upload, I went down a bit of a rabbit-hole about the authorship of this and the other associated games (using sources including CASA and links therefrom). And now I’ve gone a bit further.
I’m not convinced it’s right to attribute this work solely to Charles/Chuck, whatever his 2000s website and the game zip itself says. (Which is why I just added Dian on e.g. IFDB.)
But my research was patchy, I didn’t find definitive info, and I’m certainly willing to be corrected; I can see that e.g. CASA folk such as yourself and ‘Exemptus’ have spent a lot more time researching these games.
The earliest source I looked at is the article “Do-It-Yourself Adventure”, by Dian Crayne, in PC Magazine, September 1983, pp266-276. (Found via CASA, I know you’ve been all over this.)
This is very much in the first person singular, without any hint of collaboration that I’ve seen, implying all these works were Dian’s alone. Selected quotes:
Dian Crayne is the author of several adventure games published by Norell Data Systems: The Phantom’s Revenge, The Hermit’s Secret, Monster Rally, Valley of the Kings, and Elsinore. She has been a programmer/analyst for 10 years. Her science fiction writings are published under the pseudonym Dian Girard.
I have written six [sic] text adventures for the IBM PC
My own adventure games are built from two basic parts: the driver program and the text files or “script.” […] Because the games are script-driven, I can build 70 to 80 percent of a new game without ever touching the actual program source code.
Jason Dyer’s Renga in Blue blog post from 2022, ostensibly about The Hermit’s Secret, has some research into Dian and Chuck in general, as do its comments. It attributes the games to Dian, and describes the arrangement with Norell Data Systems (a Proper Publisher). One of their 1982 catalogues has some of the games, under her birth name, Dian Girard; again, no hint of Chuck. (She married Chuck long before, in 1972.)
Dian had her own page under Chuck’s webspace (~ccrayne) in the 2000s, but I haven’t seen a version of that mentioned the games.
There’s lots of records of Dian and Chuck on SFF fandom sites (some linked elsewhere in this post), but I haven’t seen any talking about the computer games.
I can see that the consensus at CASA has hitherto been very much that these games are Dian’s, including textual comparison between the games and Dian’s trad fiction (e.g.)
I’ve had a look at the copies of the games that I can find for more clues:
IF Archive archive.org ~ccrayne
The Hermit's Secret - 1 -
The Phantom's Revenge 1 1 -
(Castle) Elsinore 1 - 2
Monster Rally - - 1
Valley of the Kings - - -
Granny's Place - 1 -
way too much detail on individual game copies
In all cases, the main script file (.WRK/.DAT file) is XOR’d with 0xDC
bytes (argued to be Dian’s initials), and once unscrambled can easily be read with e.g. strings
.
The Hermit’s Secret. 1 copy.
- Hermit's Secret, The : Free Download, Borrow, and Streaming : Internet Archive
ZIP timestamps 1996. No readme file.
Strings from running game /
“THE HERMIT’S SECRET - Copyright (C) 1982 Temple Software, Inc.”
“This program and script were developed by
Temple Software, Inc.”
“As you glance back at the rocketship you notice a number
painted across its hull in large block letters: CAC021638
THIS IS YOUR CERTIFICATE REGISTRATION NUMBER - COPY IT DOWN!”
[hm, ‘registration number’ appears to be Charles A. Crayne’s initials and birthdate]
The Phantom’s Revenge. 2 copies (basically the same version).
- The Phantom's Revenge : Temple Software : Free Download, Borrow, and Streaming : Internet Archive
ZIP timestamps 1983. No readme file.
“Copyright (C) 1983 Temple Software, Inc.”
“This program and script were developed by Temple Software, Inc.”
“As you glance back at the motorboat, you notice its
registration number: JDC082942
THIS IS YOUR REGISTRATION NUMBER - COPY IT DOWN!!”
[again, ‘registration number’ appears to be J. Dian Crayne’s initials and birthdate]
- if-archive/games/pc/phantom.zip
IF Archive metadata: timestamp 1993-12-06 (I think I trust that means the Archive really has had it since 1993); “by Temple Software”.
Different ZIP wrapper. ZIP timestamps 1983, again. Shared files identical, but also contains a very brief READ.ME:
“This adventure is a copyrighted work. It may not be sold or modified.
Premission is granted to post on BBS Systems and other data services.”
(Castle) Elsinore. 3 copies, of which 2 distinct.
- if-archive/games/pc/elsinore.zip
IF Archive metadata: 1993-01-09, “version 1.0, by Temple Software”
Extensive README. Talks about “copyright by the authors, doing business as Temple Software” (note plural). Invites donations in name of Charles A. Crayne at a street address in Manhattan Beach, CA. “This information is valid as of 9/19/92”
From running game / data file:
This game responds to the VERSION
verb (others of these games don’t, except where noted):
“Castle Elsinore Version 1.0”
“CASTLE ELSINORE - Copyright (C) 1983, 1992 by Temple Software, Inc.”
Similar donation request, but with singular ‘author’.
No obvious embedded registration code, unlike the previous two.
- Wayback machine for ~ccrayne, for DOS. (Only one capture, 2007-06-28.)
ZIP file identical to IF Archive version.
- Wayback machine for ~ccrayne, for Linux. (Only one capture, 2007-06-11.)
Tar timestamps 2005-6. File owner “chuck/chuck”.
Readme file still talks about “authors”. “This information is valid as of 6/23/06”.
Different .dat/.inx to DOS version:
“Castle Elsinore Version 2.0”
“Copyright (C) 1983, 1992, 1997, 2005 by Charles A. Crayne”
Street address updated to Willits, CA.
A few new game strings (responses to new verbs?)
Monster Rally. 1 copy (as unearthed by Canalboy just now).
- Wayback machine for ~ccrayne, for DOS. (Only one capture, 2007-06-11.)
ZIP timestamps 2004-6.
Readme: still talks about “authors”; Willits, CA address; “This information is valid as of 6/22/06”.
Running game / .DAT file:
Understands VERSION
verb:
“Monster Rally Beta Version A.”
“MONSTER RALLY - Copyright (C) 1983, 1992, 1997 by Charles A. Crayne.”
“This program and script were developed by Charles A. Crayne.”
Granny’s Place. 1 copy.
- Granny's Place : Free Download, Borrow, and Streaming : Internet Archive
ZIP timestamps 1996. No readme.
“Copyright (C) 1983 by Temple Software, Inc.”
“This program and script were developed by Temple Software, Inc.”
I’m particularly suspicious of this “Beta Version” business for Monster Rally. Presumably there was a non-beta version in the 1980s. Maybe this was some abandoned prototype of the ‘upgrade to run from a hard disk’ mentioned on Chuck’s mid-2000s web page, prodded into life in the 2000s?:
Most of the text adventure games are probably lost forever, since they were developed on 5 1/4 inch floppies, and even if those floppies are still physically readable, I no longer have any way of converting them to modern media. However, in about 1992, when I still had such capability, I did upgrade two of them to run from a hard disk, and even more recently, created a native Linux version for Castle Elsinore.
My speculations on a timeline and circumstances, based on all that:
- 1980s: published by Norell (until Norell goes bust in ~1986 at latest?), probably trying to make money in earnest – don’t know if any of the copies we have are from this era (timestamps notwithstanding) – don’t know if “Temple Software” branding existed – promoted under Dian’s name(s), but maybe no personal name included in games?
- 1990s: tweaked, and disseminated via BBSes and early Internet on a donation-ware basis, under “Temple Software, Inc.” name, which I assume means Chuck+Dian (seems most likely that most surviving copies are these); not marketed with named author, but Chuck handling donations
- 2004-6: Chuck exhumes these for his own amusement; puts some on his website, with freshly-tweaked versions (understanding new verbs, including
VERSION
) updated to be under his own name instead of “Temple Software, Inc.” (maybe because company no longer registered?)
I don’t know why Dian isn’t credited on Chuck’s web page and newer builds, but it seems clear that Charles/Chuck being credited is a change made long after the games were written. So I think it’s probably best to credit both of them, for all these games.
I guess maybe Dian lost interest / didn’t want the hassle of dealing with registrations or Internet stuff / no longer cared to be associated with these games?
(Chuck predeceased Dian, in 2009, which is after the sources we’re looking at. Dian died in 2017.)
I mean I suppose it’s possible that the games were really Chuck’s all along, and were associated with his wife when they were trying to actually make money from them, because of her reputation as a trad author and/or programmer? But that’s not the way round that usually goes. And, as noted previously, people think the game’s writing style is Dian’s. (Also, her range of pen names might dliute reputation effects: Dian Girard, sometimes used for the games, and J. D. Crayne.)