I’ve written, rewritten, trashed, and started over several times here. I’m not getting anywhere and I need some feedback. I had this part (blurb, cover, etc.) fleshed out, but misjudged the time I would need to finish.
So, I removed a section of that game and reframed it and completely rewrote it as it’s own game. Then I slid the unfinished remainder to ParserComp in my head, which is all fine and well. The problem is the existing blurb doesn’t fit anymore. This is my current bit (current iteration of cover art), and I’m very unhappy about it (working title: Adrift):
They always go on about the stars, stunning vistas spanning the heavens. Celestial tapestry…
You see nothing but a pitch black void and the sun before you, ceaslessly constricting your pupils. You don’t know how to turn away, let alone get home.
It figures you’re going to die in space and you won’t even see the stars…
Very open to suggestions.
(Just putting the cover here to help paint a better picture overall)
