I did this in the blurb of my submission but apparently that text isn’t displayed at all.
Through Death New Life is my first attempt at IF (it shows, I think) and is written in Ink.
It’s the intro to an choice based short story and it’s actually less than I planned but all that I managed until the deadline. I’m glad for any feedback that would help me to improve. Mainly:
- Does the intro work?
- Is it interesting at all and what can I do to make it so?
- What would you expect from the story after that intro?