That was fun! I couldn’t figure out how to use the ladder (I assume that’s the other solution?) but I did enjoy honking the horn until everyone came to rescue me–fortunately they somehow didn’t let the door lock behind them: whew!.
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In general, your articles (“a,” “the”) and capitalization could use some work, if you know how to do that: some notes below but I noticed several more. Also not everywhere has exit descriptions: in particular I only found the dining room by trying directions until one worked.
Once visitors started arriving, it wasn’t quite clear what triggers the story to move forward: it doesn’t seem to like it when you wait but I mostly just felt like I moved around randomly and looked at things until the plot continued.
x nisse (in living room) “he should be more careful on ski slope” (on the ski slope?)
in the living room, a mantle is a cloak or covering, a mantel is a shelf above a fireplace.
The living room doesn’t have exit descriptions: I just tried stuff to get to the dining room. Hmm, ditto the kitchen.
kitchen - stove doesn’t appear to have an article? “In stove is a holiday feast” - “You open stove” etc. (should be “the stove”).
Kitchen - “A long table is prepared for the adults paragraph break and a smaller table for the children.”
Living room after everyone gets here - there’s an extra blank line before “Your cat’s eyes go wide” - not a big deal but I thought I’d mention it. Also some of the capitalization and articles are odd here too: “You can see Children, Cousin Louise, Pug, sofa (on which are Uncle Max, Hank and Cat) …”
kiss aunt gertrude - “Great Aunt Gertrude might not like that.” well, why does she have mistletoe on a pole on her walker then?
