Hello! I’m looking for feedback on how to improve my first IF, TB:W. I work on this as a solo developer, from the writing, coding, art, editing and bug testing the combat system, so any opinion about any part of this will be greatly appreciated.
I have been a long time fan of dark fantasy stories since I was a young girl, and would attempt to write my own horror or fantasy stories to limited success, but I feel fairly pleased with this one.
There is no sexual content so far, however I cannot say that there won’t be in future. I’m not against adding it, but there’s no need to focus on it either. I add the adult tag due to mentions of suicide, fantasy violence, fantasy racism, and morally dubious (at best) characters and characters who are outright evil.
The combat system is meant to be randomised and give some difficulty, although it gets easier after the prologue when the protagonist has access to other items and skills. The later parts of the game so far were written while I was suffering from writers block, and will be improved at a later date.
Thank you in advance to anyone who plays it, even if you don’t leave feedback.
Edit: The only things I haven’t made personally are Chapel’s custom macros and a few things from manonamora, all of which are credited both in game and on the game page.