The past few days, I’ve been going over this game with the author. We corrected many misspellings and I gave suggestions and comments about gameplay. I got more explicit guidance from the author. This gave me the opportunity to see deeper into the game and the author’s intentions.
This piece really has the potential to be a gripping experience about loss and how to deal with it. I hope the author makes the effort of developing it further. Playing through it with other people as we did and discussing their experiences would benefit both this work and any future IF-pieces by this author. Very promising.
Review: Eleanor - Details (ifdb.org)
[Edit: also, apparently I really like typing “author”]