I’m currently trying to develop a scenario where the player “hits” an NPC named Jimmy with a weapon (which has been defined as a kind of thing) that is the ice pick. Here’s how the action of hitting is currently defined.
Hitting is an action applying to two visible things.
Understand "hit [someone] with [weapon preferably held]" as hitting
Here is the line that Inform 7 doesn’t seem to understand.
Instead of hitting Jimmy with the Ice Pick:
What exactly am I doing wrong that gives me this message?
Problem. You wrote ‘Instead of hitting Jimmy with the Ice Pick’ , which seems to introduce a rule taking effect only if the action is ‘hitting Jimmy with the Ice Pick’. But that did not make sense as a description of an action. I am unable to place this rule into any rulebook.