Twine stuff is not my cup of tea but I liked this a lot!
It is short, to the point, not flowery and makes excellent use of the medium.
I wish it were a bit more interactive, but since it is short it works excellently as it is.
I think we would’ve liked for it to be a lot more interactive too, but we wanted to make something short and quick first to prove to ourselves we could use the tools. We’d love to make something with more interactivity down the line!