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Preordained (A Dimensions Tale) by Jackson The Bear

Summary: A short tale starring the Commander of a spaceship, their crew, and Death.

Thoughts: A short sci-fi story where a ship essentially lands into an ambush. There are multiple endings (all of which end fairly abruptly - if there is not link, it’s an ending). The building of the action is interesting, but I wish the different elements (NPCs or other important groups) were more fleshed out, or you could have a bit more agency in what to do.

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