Choice of Games has given me the opportunity to update my Christmas game In the Service of Mrs. Claus, and as part of that I’ve written 20K words of new content, much of it in the first chapter or two.
I know it’s last minute, but I need to finish it by Dec 1, and I could really use some people to read through it and let me know if there are any egregious errors (like calling you the wrong name or characters disappearing mid-sentence or anything crazy like that).
So if you plan on staying home for Thanksgiving and might need something to do, I’d love to have 3-4 people take it for a spin to help iron out the wrinkles. I check it as much as I can, but I have ‘author blindness’.
In any case, thanks and have a great week!
Edit: The way the games compile, me sending a file doesn’t act well with mobile, erasing your progress if you exit out. It’s more stable on desktop browsers.