If player has not entered tent for one turn:
say "There was was a horrible storm that night. The rain was falling so hard and flashes of lightning were everywhere that you feel into a muddy sink hole and died.";
END THE GAME IN DEATH.
Thank you for your help but whats going on now is that when I start the game (I start it in a forest, then go to a marsh AND THEN I go to the field where I have included the code) it lets me play for only three turns and I havent even gotten out of the field yet. So how do I make the code only work in the field?
You can’t just leave a conditional out there on its own like that; this sort of thing has to start with a rule header, probably “Every turn.” (Other rule headers would be things like “Instead of going north in the campground,” “Before looking,” “Checking taking the tent,” like that. The chapter of the documentation on Basic Actions is useful here, and section 9.5 on Every Turn.)
If you fix that, though, you’ll find that Inform doesn’t understand “Player has not entered the tent for one turn.” It looks as though you might be trying to use a formulation like the past and perfect tenses from sections 9.12 and 9.13 of the documentation, but for that you need “We have…” and not “Player has…”
Even so, “Every turn when we have not entered the tent for one turn,” though it compiles, doesn’t do anything. I’m not sure why, not being awfully confident around this kind of formulation. But you can make it work by relying on the turn count (assuming you want this to happen at the beginning of the game):
Campground is a room.
The tent is an enterable container in campground.
Every turn when the turn count is greater than 1 and we have not entered the tent:
say "There was a horrible storm that night. Flashes of lightning were everywhere and the rain was falling so hard that you fell into a muddy sink hole and died.";
end the game in death.
Of course this doesn’t prevent the player from leaving the tent again. (By the way, this will compile even if you don’t indent “end the game in death,” since this doesn’t have any if-thens inside the rule, but it’s probably nice to get into the habit of indenting everything so it’s one level in from the thing it’s conditional on.)
I would say I see some reasons (“END THE GAME IN DEATH”) but like in many a topic that I think might be leg-pulling, I of course have no way to really know
There was the question about George Lucas (“I can’t seem to get my character to talk to George Lucas.”), gnusurferdude’s topic where it seemed I was paralysed until I opened my eyes while lying on the beach (“You smell what you believe to be the tropical scent of coconuts and sea salt.”) and now this one has me feeling into a muddy hole and dying after 2 moves.
If they aren’t pulling my leg, they are at least entertaining me as I learn.
I playtested a version of the beginning of her game. It was not at all bad. A mystery puzzle thing starting in an abandoned laboratory where sinister experiments had been conducted on you and a couple of animals. It seems that the idea was that you would have been able to switch minds with some of the animals in order to solve some of the puzzles and then flog a literal dead horse to life somewhere along the line. There was a certain nice creepiness over it. But the plot called for a few pretty advanced things and probably a full-length text adventure with attention to lots of details; so I suppose it just seemed too overwhelming in the end. But, yes, it’s a pity.