This a good spot to get feedback on writing snippets?


I was wondering if this would be a good section of the forums to get feedback on writing style and direction for a mobile gamebook I’m working on?

Hey, welcome to the forum. Yep this is the right section for your gamebook. If you’re looking for feedback just on writing style (so not in the context of a complete game or work-in-progress) then probably the General subforum is a better fit.