silver & gold - a story in two voices (twine)

Playing Beta Testing Requests and Discussion
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Hi all!

I made a short story originally for a “Pairs” challenge over on Twinery.org. This is a story told in two voices, in two panels. You can follow the links on either side as you please, until the voices… meet.

I’m new to intfiction forums, so I thought a new work might be a good way to introduce myself!

I would greatly appreciate any feedback you might have – any confusion, intrigue, frustration, etc. And typos, always typos.

Silver & Gold

on ifdb

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The narrative is non-straightforward enough that I am not going to be able to process it this evening (my brain is in a somewhat-fried state), but: dang that is some pretty presentation.

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That’s fair, it’s more difficult than my usual. And thanks! The presentation of it is pretty important to me.