Requesting beta testers for IF Comp entry (G-rated ChoiceScript story)

Hi and thank you in advance. I’m always stunned and encouraged by the generosity of the IF Comp community when it comes to both beta testing and reviewing.

I’m writing “Bali B&B” a choice-based story about running a Bed and Breakfast in Bali, Indonesia.

It’s extremely low-stakes and sweet (I hope) and chill, and no one dies and there’s no violence.

There are 7 chapters in all, so if you like you can beta test the first 3 chapters now-ish and the rest later, or wait until Friday 22nd and beta test the whole thing.

It’ll be about 45,000 words altogether, so I think that takes 1-2 hours depending on how quickly you select choices from the list.

Please PM me your email address if you’re interested in trying it out.


It’s on a third draft now, so reasonably polished. But I still badly need beta readers so if anyone’s interested please let me know.


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I’m very much interested. I can start with the three or wait, whichever suits you best.

You can reach me at In addition if you have any notes specifically on what you’d like from the test please include them and I’ll give it my best.

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