I’m finishing up a Twine game for this year’s competition and looking for critical feedback. The working title is “My Roads not Taken” (a reference to the Robert Frost poem “The Road not Taken”). It is slice of life, alternating between scenes from the narator’s childhood, and their young adult years.
This is a novella length work. The writing is already strong, but I would especially like feedback on my use of Twine as the medium for story-telling.
Please contact me if you are able to offer critical feedback before the competition deadline at the end of the month.