Letters from the Sun-- New Twine Writer looking for Beta!

Hi! I’ve managed to finish my first IF piece, a 3-5 minute narrative about the sun as it writes a letter to the Earth. I’m new to the programming elements of all of this, and I’d really appreciate getting some eyes on this piece to help me figure out what needs amending!

If you’re interested, the game is here: https://lorwell.itch.io/sunletters

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Cool, I’ll take a look.

Thank you so much! Please let me know if/what issues you come across! (and what you think of the game, if you like c: )