I'm working on my novel Inform 7 documentation again, mind reviewing some new sections?

My main challenge with the official Inform 7 documentation is the lack of simple, working examples! There are examples in the “cookbook” but they’re usually much more complicated than what I need.

That’s why I got the idea to make some documentation of my own that focuses on examples of code, and what the resulting gameplay looks like. I call it:

Inform 7 At Play:

I tend to work on it in bursts every few months, and I just did a significant amount of work in the Actions section:

and the World Setup section:

I’d love some help proofreading, these sections (or any parts of the documentation). I’d love any feedback on the code examples, clarity, tone, how consistent they are with the rest of the documentation, or any other kind of feedback you have. Thanks in advance.