I have not played the original The King and the Crown, so could you explain what is different? (In the game it is mentioned that the walkthrough-section was adapted from an earlier written document. Are there other changes/additions?)
[spoiler]I was mildly taken aback by things like
where I would have expected multiple actions(opening/unlocking, taking the item) to be done after one other automatically. But maybe that is just me being spoiled ^^’.[/spoiler]
I love the custom error messages, by the way!
(And the fart jokes. And the dragon-slaying.)
Also, I believe the your attention is suddently drawn to X works very well in a game like this, and it was a great ride to just follow these attention-presented objects around for a while.
Although the game is of course short, I find your writing to be very enjoyable, and I love the way the endings are structured. They really add an extra layer of depth to this otherwise very lighthearted game.
I really do hope that you’ll get around to writing/finishing your novel!