Last time around we did sonnet, villanelle, terza rima, limerick, Sapphic stanza, clerihew, and double-dactyl/ollekebolleke/higgledy-piggledy. These, or any other forms, are welcome. (Extra credit awarded for drottkvaet.) Spoiler tags for all, please.
Raik (Burns stanza, naturally):
[spoiler]Hails this, our newest comp contender
From land of Young and Old Pretenders;
Half half my lines I’ll therefore render
In braid Scots leed;
No Englishman could e’er defend a
Mair taupie deed.
Two heroes: one, with blade a-waving,
For magic treasures goes a-caving;
Meanwhile, in data-entry slaving
Is ilka brither;
This story’s kind of crazy-paving
Ane shifts tae ither.
One strives with beasts, one with neuroses
And life is ne’er a bed of roses;
Props for sustaining paradosis
In halesome fettle;
But in the end, each tale composes
Ower smaw an ettle.[/spoiler]
I am personally in broad agreement with the anti-haiku essay, but - as last time around demonstrated - if you tell someone not to do something in a thread like this, they’ll take it as a challenge. Therefore: write as many haiku as you like, but absolutely no sestinas will be permitted.
There was a young fellow from Florida
Who broke down in the Everglades corridor
His femur got shattered
Where faeces was splattered:
After that, the tale only gets horrider.
I agree with this, too, though I’m sort of glad I didn’t see this last year. My last year’s joke haikus are not completely terrible. I think. Well, they were worth trying once.
ETA: wow, it’s from back in 2001? I was surprised at first, but I shouldn’t have been.
Plus I feel better about being annoyed by that guy at work when he told the Refrigerator haiku more than once.
Begscape (a dróttkvætt… sort of… I left out the kenning aspect. And probably many other subtleties of the form.)
Angry walking hungry
Envy of this city
Shattered shed this safety
Such expensive shelter
Walking stranger weaker
Wander ever weary
Spat on by a spirit
Spite for sleepy beggar
I made a start on a beautiful outlaw, with each line a lipogram for the corresponding letter in the word ‘Zest’. Unfortunately, this wasn’t much of a constraint so the end result wasn’t very engaging. If I had more interest, I’d repeat the experiment either making it a complete lipogram of ‘z’, ‘e’, ‘s’ and ‘t’, or I’d make it at least rhyme and give it a metre worth a damn. Only so many hours in the day though.
ZEST (A Beautiful Outlaw)
[spoiler]Billy vaguely juices away life in quietude, exhaling rollup smoke
Without qualm or disfavour, Billy will just laxly carry on this way: smoking, snoozing, standing about at work
Unwaxed lemon peel will add fragrance to jazz up any baked vegetable quiche
No unwaxed lemon peel could possibly invoke fragrance or jazz up a life so chequered grey on grey as Billy’s[/spoiler]
Sigmund’s Quest (fornyrðislag, which I probably don’t fully understand):
Sing bold Sigmund | sword-extractor!
Techno-peasants | praise his pixels
Shout, O Sigmund | Sigurd’s sire!
Through thread thrifty | thine the story.
Foes foreshadow | fell thy future.
(Sigmund spoilers: | sister-shagger.)
Short the singing | still unfinished.
Slasher Swamp, anapaestic tetrameter (not maybe quite a classic form, but …)
[spoiler]I was driving through Florida, safe in my truck
when I quite unexpectedly ran out of luck:
for the engine had blown, I was left in the lurch
and with nothing to do, except wander and search.
So I first tried to look in a thicket I’d spied,
until, quick as a wink, I was eaten and died;
and I next tried to search in some sort of a shed –
but you won’t be surprised that I ended up dead.
Then I searched in a briefase, but that popped my clogs
and wherever I roamed in those terrible bogs
sudden death dogged my steps, till I felt no surprise
at the news of my latest depressing demise.
A gas station killed me, and so did a plant,
the fatalities multiplied, truly I can’t
count the infinite ways that the game found to send
my poor lost little soul to its miserable end.
So if you are ever round everglade way
avoid Slasher Swamp, it is no place to stay.
If you find you are there, your predicament’s grave,
and my only advice is to save, save, save, save.[/spoiler]
As an author I’m not allowed to comment specifically, but I think I can say it’s reminded me of the glorious tradition of reworking other people’s art as silly poems. Specifically, Wendy Cope’s limerick version of The Waste Land.