And I think a final text-dump, for the characters and epilogue with Aistheta alive:
[spoiler]“I have evidence that Jana Anderes is guilty of graft. She has been slowly removing rare reagents from storage, transporting them off the Retort when in home port, and profiting from their illicit sale.
“This much I knew weeks ago. It has taken me much longer to confirm who Anderes is working with… for I required the hardest of proof. I am now convinced that Captain Hart is involved in thecrime. She must have discovered it – and rather than bringing Anderes to marchcourt, decided to let the business continue under her own thumb.
“Needless to say, we cannot bring this to light until the Retort reaches home port. But we are becoming critically short on certain supplies, and I fear for the safety of the marcher.”
The dragon slides past the Lieutenant’s frozen form. As it does, you hear her voice: “I can’t sell the stuff off when the Captain is watching me. But why hasn’t she nicked me yet?” She has not moved.
Lt Anderes and her partners have managed to put the entire marcher at risk. Well, if the Retort is going down, at least they’ll be dragged down with you.
Lt Anderes and her partners have managed to put the entire marcher at risk. You’re astonished that they could plan so well, and so poorly, at the same time.
“Powes’ depredations, we find, have been calculatedly random – not so localized as to implicate any particular superior officer. Instead, the result has been a steady decrease in the Retort’s overall operational efficiency. The Ministry has not yet acted, but if this continues, they will.
“Lacking evidence of wrongdoing, the blame will inevitably fall upon Captain Hart. Thus we must assume that the Captain is Powes’ target. She would not face marchcourt for running a ‘scruffy ship’, but she would likely be transferred to a lesser command.
“I extended my search, and discovered lengthy correspondence between Powes and Captain Mehta of the Lightfire. Captain Mehta is in the offing for a favorable command, and so we must assume…”
The dragon slides past the Lieutenant’s frozen form. As it does, you hear his voice: “The Retort is limping already. A few more ‘mistakes’ and the Captain will be blamed…”
Powes has the look of a man whose plans are moving out of his control. He has committed himself to someone’s destruction. Did he know what he was doing, when he began? But it’s too late now for him to change course.
Powes has the look of a man whose plans are moving out of his control. He has committed himself to someone’s destruction. You sense that it was only a game to him, up until this moment. Well, let him stew in the reality.
“I have confirmed that Captain Hart has been conducting a covert affair – with a junior officer, no less: Ensign Sydney Ctesc.
“Ctesc has apparently been delving into restricted alchemical texts; the Captain has both encouraged and helped to conceal these activities. The specter of a ‘love potion’ must arise in these situations, but I do not think that Ctesc’s research has managed anything so fantastical. The Captain must be honestly smitten. It is a breach of her discipline that I could not have imagined.
“The danger of Ctesc’s work has not, I think, escaped her. The messages I have intercepted imply that she fears some alchemical disaster, but not an imminent one. I am not so complacent, however. –N”
The dragon slides past the Captain’s frozen form. As it does, you hear her voice: “How can I meet Sydney in the crawlway without being seen?” She has not moved.
The Captain has flung herself into this situation for her own reasons. But you wish her timing had been better.
The Captain has flung herself into this situation for her own reasons, and you’re not about to accuse your superiors of bad judgement.
You focus on the colorless spark through the oculus. A new memory comes into focus. “The ship’s compass has become disaligned; display does not function. Marcher transit in this state is risky. Recommendation: inscribe an intensional ballast and place it below the observatory.”
Your cleaning work in the alchemy lab… no. Not important. Could Ctesc have caused this? All those books you liberated for him… he promised that you’d share any secrets he found. But you might have underestimated his greed. Maybe if you find him.[/spoiler]
Not much new on the characters or how they fit together, but here’s one thing I got from that: the ship’s compass display is broken no matter which dragon is alive, but only Aistheta will point it out. I wondered if there might be a way to make four ballasts – there are three brass and one steel token in the game – but the ceremony consumes zafranum (which I’ve been assuming is saffron?) If there were another slightly different ending (which I doubt, actually), achieving that somehow would be where I’d bet for achieving it.
EDIT: I see we had the same thought, Evouga!