First Twine Effort

Hi, Not sure if this is correct section to post in. If not please move. I have just completed two short presentations using Twine. One on Rudtard Kipling and the other on Poetry. Both were made in Harlowe 3 using the Harlowe Audio Library. I have also completed the first Chapter of an interactive detective story called Swansea Noir. As these are my first efforts with Twine they may have flaws. I’m still learning aged 73! They are on my website and feedback would be appreciated. They can be found by selecting the Play Games tab at the top. Both presentations have a normal version and a version for tablets with reduced image sizes. Best Wishes Mike.