Feedback wanted on a Twine game

Recently created a Twine paranormal detective game, and was interested in getting some early feedback on it! This is particular game is actually episode two in what’s intended to be a long-running series, but one of the things that I’m looking for advice on is how welcoming the setting/story is to jump into without having played episode one. If a serial killer investigation sim Twine set in a horror/fantasy setting sounds interesting, please let me know either here or through private messages!

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I’d be happy to give some feedback on it!

I’ll take a look!

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