I’ve recently wrote a short Cyberpunk text game and I am looking for feedback before I continue with the story.
The game has (I think) an interesting mechanic and interactions with the main characters in addition to multiple endings.
I would LOVE to get your feedback on every aspect of the game: Story, pacing, characters, language, mechanics etc.
This is an html game (made using Twine). To play, please:
Use the link here: drive.google.com/open?id=1gy2df … EPx6-gd1Gt
Download the html file to your computer (I couldn’t use this on mobile for some reason).
Double click to Play (your computer browser will open)
Send your feedback either in this thread, a private message or to my email at firstname.lastname@example.org
Thanks for the help!